The Possibility Curve

I have now given up everything in my real life for this screenplay and it’s been a blast. Now I am feeling the pinch of the isolation I’ve created. My friends love the story but can’t really give me any critical feedback on structure, etc.My son, home for the summer from college, is sick of the story and being asked to read it.I think I need to hire someone to look at my screenplay and give me some feedback. I’m checking on line and think I may have someone. Scary to have a pro look at it. I still have Francis Ford Coppola’s contest to get ready for. I’m guessing I have some things to do to rewrite. Better to know now than later.What the hell! I’m sending it off to get reviewed.